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Reel in the wire bridging the gap of
Negative space
Between our knees.

I am falling through disaster;
The discomfort of you reading my mind through my pupils
Is a pain so beautiful, I can't help
But read right back.

It's the quiet in the carpet tiles
And the angry noise in your shoes
That divides my mouth;
That parts my lips and spews insignificance
Without intervention of my teeth
To bite back
Affection.

Capture the flag;
Capture the ache.
Capture the ache between our knees
And break it.
Close the gap and seal it.
Sitting, waiting, wishing.
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:icondrakedrakedrake:
drakedrakedrake Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2008
really bautiful written :D
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:icongardennomi:
Gardennomi Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2008
who is it?
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:icondifferentlikeyou:
DifferentLikeYou Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008
Somebody I can't be with, so it doesn't matter anyway ):
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:icongardennomi:
Gardennomi Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008
why not to be with him? Is he taken?
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:icondifferentlikeyou:
DifferentLikeYou Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2008
No, it's a little more complicated than that. It's difficult to explain without telling a really long story.

By the by: I LOVE YOOOU xxxx
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silverwingeddarkness Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008  Student General Artist
More then I long for rapture, I long to be entralled that my thorns will be of a rose.
The beauty of agony and longing.
Tu as capturé l'essence de chaos
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008  Student Writer
the hope becomes reality - the hope itself (the flag captured, the ache sealed off forever) :D
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